Rough Cut Feedback

Feedback -

the critisisms we got were as expected...

- needs more close - ups (variation in shots)
- little hard to follow - make storyline clearer
-bit quick and fast paced
-short
-can see dates

we are using widescreen which will get rid of the dates

we are adding more clips this weekend t make it clearer and include close-ups


good points -

-clear narrative
-good location and name
-good sounds, fits well
-camera work good
-good costumes + setting
-editing so far good

to improve, we are going to add more shots, then edit. when editing we need to put it in reverse and perhaps give it a grainy effect/black and white.

the extra clips will make it less fast paced and make the storyline clearer.